Cybercity Knights - Comic Panel Test 1, Ember

There will be a short prologue/pilot comic chapter for next year that I have already started working on. Plus I got to think of an official title, or modify the existing one.

This cyberpunk comic is intended for adults (mature themes, bloody violence, etc) and is about how Ember gets caught up in the conflicts of "Cybercity", ultimately gearing up with stealth combat armour and joining a cause. The armour masks a wearer's signature from the many drones and detection technologies available that are able to search for an organism based on their bio signatures like audio patterns, heat, pheromones, air density, electromagnetism, and surface vibrations. With the armour, it only leaves the option of regular detection methods.

But first I wanted to take my OCs and simplify them while putting more emphasis on their facial expressions. In addition, I also played with lighting a bit and hopefully I can take these new methods with me as I finish the prologue chapter...

edit: added text to the pic
edit2: removed the text, made proportion adjustments since it's going to be one of my primary reference points